The structure of this feels off, the punchline already happened in panel two and the text in panel three isn’t adding anything. A panel 3 without text would be funnier imo because it would let the joke soak, I also think moving the punchline to panel 3 would have worked better.
I think the punchline is him opening the vat so it can kill humanz and solve the climate crisis, without the third one it could just be him inventing random stuff/wasting money (I only got the joke on panel 3)
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The structure of this feels off, the punchline already happened in panel two and the text in panel three isn’t adding anything. A panel 3 without text would be funnier imo because it would let the joke soak, I also think moving the punchline to panel 3 would have worked better.
Overanalyzing a comic. Why do I even bother reading lemmy comments?
I think the punchline is him opening the vat so it can kill humanz and solve the climate crisis, without the third one it could just be him inventing random stuff/wasting money (I only got the joke on panel 3)
I assumed this is the new form of the human race
Oh I guess I missed the joke, then. I thought it was a bit of a non-sequitur. I think I still prefer my version
Why does he look sad and say “you can go”
Instead of “Precisely! Spring Terror!” Or something like that?
Something like:
That is quite funny. Well done.
Is he looking sad?
He seems to be looking down und speaking into a microphone.